IEEE Magnetics · Honolulu, Hawaii

Accelerate the scientific method with agile design of advanced magnetics

A review of the talk deck, and a plan to make it land with an IEEE Magnetics audience.

Your abstract promises a technical talk: the design and magnetization process, the outputs of each phase, current operating windows, the new frontiers for previously impractical geometries, and digitally controlled micro-magnetization for magnetic-circuit optimization. The plan below gets the deck there.

Fix first, before anything else. The title slide still carries a stray line, "Series B Financing Terms 11-29-23," pasted in from an investor deck. Delete it. And fix "The Designer's Delema" → "Dilemma."

1Aim it at the room

The deck right now is a trade-show story (the Jony Ive quote, "delight our senses," "Fast–Cheap–Perfection," Booth B26). An IEEE Magnetics audience of researchers and engineers came for the substance the abstract promised. Keep the narrative energy, but earn the technical credibility. The "Steve" walkthrough is a genuinely strong spine — lead each step with the engineering output, not the wow.

2Add the four slides the abstract promised

Send me your real figures and I'll draft these four; I've left them as labeled placeholders rather than invent numbers.

3Keep "Steve" as the method spine

The arc is the whole "accelerate the scientific method" argument, and it's good: customer meeting → PolyVision/PMCAD design (5 min) → Ansys Maxwell simulation → production-tray print (50 min) → magnetize (2 min) → prototype magnet in 57 minutes → functional print under 2 hours → customer revision in 1 hour → optimized design in half a day. Present each beat as a phase with its output and its time, not as a reveal.

4Handle the removed videos

The demo slides ("and now the magic begins," prototype printing, functional prototype) were carried by the videos you stripped out. In the static deck, replace each with a labeled still or figure plus a one-line caption, and add a QR code to the video so the room can watch it. Otherwise those slides read as empty beats.

5Tighten, then close like a technical talk

6Suggested slide order

01
Title (Series-B line removed) + the one-line promise
02
The designer's dilemma — the tyranny of the "or"
03
What agile design of advanced magnetics means
04
The magnetization process (new — how maxels are written)
05
The current operating window (new — the numbers)
06
Steve, the method walkthrough (design → sim → tray → magnetize → prototype)
07
The engagement timeline (one consolidated slide)
08
Magnetic-circuit optimization (new)
09
New frontiers — impractical geometries, now possible (new)
10
Close: what it unlocks for your research + Booth B26
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Prepared for Tim Costello · IEEE Magnetics, Honolulu · working review, noindex · nothing on this page is confidential