IEEE Magnetics · Honolulu, Hawaii
A review of the talk deck, and a plan to make it land with an IEEE Magnetics audience.
Your abstract promises a technical talk: the design and magnetization process, the outputs of each phase, current operating windows, the new frontiers for previously impractical geometries, and digitally controlled micro-magnetization for magnetic-circuit optimization. The plan below gets the deck there.
The deck right now is a trade-show story (the Jony Ive quote, "delight our senses," "Fast–Cheap–Perfection," Booth B26). An IEEE Magnetics audience of researchers and engineers came for the substance the abstract promised. Keep the narrative energy, but earn the technical credibility. The "Steve" walkthrough is a genuinely strong spine — lead each step with the engineering output, not the wow.
Send me your real figures and I'll draft these four; I've left them as labeled placeholders rather than invent numbers.
The arc is the whole "accelerate the scientific method" argument, and it's good: customer meeting → PolyVision/PMCAD design (5 min) → Ansys Maxwell simulation → production-tray print (50 min) → magnetize (2 min) → prototype magnet in 57 minutes → functional print under 2 hours → customer revision in 1 hour → optimized design in half a day. Present each beat as a phase with its output and its time, not as a reveal.
The demo slides ("and now the magic begins," prototype printing, functional prototype) were carried by the videos you stripped out. In the static deck, replace each with a labeled still or figure plus a one-line caption, and add a QR code to the video so the room can watch it. Otherwise those slides read as empty beats.
Prepared for Tim Costello · IEEE Magnetics, Honolulu · working review, noindex · nothing on this page is confidential